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The Rainbow Eight: Black by ~bereth-o-iannuar:iconbereth-o-iannuar:





star-lit night
the Goddess sings amoung us
moonlight calls magikal creatures
and joins the endless music
dancing faeries
©2005-2009 ~bereth-o-iannuar
:iconbereth-o-iannuar:

Author's Comments

attempt at new type of free-form...It'll be a series of 8 (rainbow, black, white)
I also decided that, because ANYONE can write a poem about a color, I'd make it a BIT more challenging and write about an emotion not commonly associated with that color, but still do-able.

black: not evil, sophistication, or emoness, or "punk"...actually I tried light-heartedness

I'd like to hear opinions, good? bad?...basically, what can I do to make it better?

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:iconsaneija:
Ooohhh... this one, hum, how can I say that. It feels at home? Nah... whatever. What I mean is, it really feels like me ^_^
:iconbereth-o-iannuar:
:D!!! yah, this one's one of my 2 favorites (I can't decide, this one or blue >.< ) But I kinda get what you're trying to say (seriously, your comments, like, make my week)

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RAWR.
:iconsaneija:
Ah, thank you! :D I really really like this one.

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